Paige – Great ongoing work here, but some ideas to consider:
- label for website. Website needs extra work. Seems a little basic. Needs to develop a much stronger brand identity to fit in with your star. – I know you have looked at Lana Del Ray for inspiration, but feel your images promote a stronger brand identity than what is shown through the front page of your website. Need to develop front page with something much more dynamic. Also, merchandise could be developed (again – branding). could have photo galleries, twitter update, or ‘diary’ update of what Rai is up to. Feel site needs more personality.
- Sort labelling down side. Too many and not every label needs a drop down list – bit confusing! Labels needed: Music Video, Digipack, Website, Preliminary Task, Research and Planning, Evaluation, Production diary, Assessment (if you want).
- When talking about your photos etc, say why they are/are not effective – be specific.
- Be careful with some of your prezis – they can be difficult to read on a normal screen size. Assessment to be part of one label – don’t separately have peer and teacher feedback. Theory to come under research label. Show how you have considered these later on in your planning (new post/production diary). No h/w label please!
- Be careful to be consistent in your production diary – towards the most recent it begins to become just telling me what you are doing, rather than the journey – what have you learnt? What have you taken from this?
Paige – Great ongoing work here, but some ideas to consider:
ReplyDelete- label for website. Website needs extra work. Seems a little basic. Needs to develop a much stronger brand identity to fit in with your star. – I know you have looked at Lana Del Ray for inspiration, but feel your images promote a stronger brand identity than what is shown through the front page of your website. Need to develop front page with something much more dynamic. Also, merchandise could be developed (again – branding). could have photo galleries, twitter update, or ‘diary’ update of what Rai is up to. Feel site needs more personality.
- Sort labelling down side. Too many and not every label needs a drop down list – bit confusing! Labels needed: Music Video, Digipack, Website, Preliminary Task, Research and Planning, Evaluation, Production diary, Assessment (if you want).
- When talking about your photos etc, say why they are/are not effective – be specific.
- Be careful with some of your prezis – they can be difficult to read on a normal screen size. Assessment to be part of one label – don’t separately have peer and teacher feedback. Theory to come under research label. Show how you have considered these later on in your planning (new post/production diary). No h/w label please!
- Be careful to be consistent in your production diary – towards the most recent it begins to become just telling me what you are doing, rather than the journey – what have you learnt? What have you taken from this?
- Storyboard?