Thursday 21st-
Alfie Shea- Treatment
Very high levels of detail and information with clear ideas of what you want, supported with visual support in the form of photographs and videos.Good use of referencing to research.
Well planned in the area of editing style.
Precise locations used for filming ideas but you could use a back up plan for if the weather doesn't allow you to film where you want, while you are aware of the weather being a problem you dont actually state what you would do if shooting outside had to be scrapped
While there is good details about your artist style, practice stills could be useful to demonstrate personally what your ideas entail.
Good use of a questionnaire and well analysed feed back.
Alfie Shea28 January 2014 07:04
WWW: Good range of questions and a nice balance of male and female people to get opinions from different genders
EBI: Ask more questions possibly take people aside so they're more focused on the questions and not distracted by external factors
EBI: Ask more questions possibly take people aside so they're more focused on the questions and not distracted by external factors
Alfie Shea28 January 2014 06:55
WWW: Good use of still photos backing up you information regarding where you've filmed, good information as to why you've decided on venues and costumes even reasoning for why you've taken the photos and what purpose they serve
EBI: You gave more analysis in areas, but there isn't much you could do to seriously improve this
EBI: You gave more analysis in areas, but there isn't much you could do to seriously improve this
Alfie Shea28 January 2014 07:00
WWW: Good analysis of stars websites and also well reflected upon with how the level at which the star is established effects their site
EBI: You talk about how this research will impact the content and themes of your own website as well as colour schemes and layout
EBI: You talk about how this research will impact the content and themes of your own website as well as colour schemes and layout
