www: You have clearly begun to analyse the different aspects of the video, considering Goodwin's theory. You have used visuals to represent what exactly you are talking about. EBI: It's important that you check over your punctuation use etc, as clarity of expression in your written work is also considered. Try to also develop why you think the band chose a narrative/performance video that could provide a negative image of the band.
www: You have clearly begun to analyse the different aspects of the video, considering Goodwin's theory. You have used visuals to represent what exactly you are talking about.
ReplyDeleteEBI: It's important that you check over your punctuation use etc, as clarity of expression in your written work is also considered. Try to also develop why you think the band chose a narrative/performance video that could provide a negative image of the band.